Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Robert Frost Terrifying Paper


Chuck Harlan
Mr. McElveen
English II
30 January 2012

Is He Terrifying?

            Some people due to the gloomy elements of his poetry have called Robert Frost “terrifying”. Some might say that he is an outstanding poet because of his terrifying words but based on Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening people may conclude that Robert Frost is indeed not a terrifying poet.
            This is more of the type of a depressing poem than more of the terrifying poem. There are many elements of it being depressing. The first stanza for example, “… To watch his woods fill up with snow.” Snow could be symbolic for death because whenever snow comes everything dies. So when Frost says that his woods are filling up with snow this could be symbolic because a forest is usually full of animal and plant life but when it fills up with snow everything either dies or sleeps. So the narrator is saying that his life is filling with death.
            The second stanza is also similar to the first. “My little horse must think it queer To stop without a farmhouse near Between the woods and frozen lake The darkest evening of the year.” This also has elements of symbolism in it. When is says darkest evening of the year this could be referencing the darkest evening of the year not because of the amount of light, but more in the sense of amount of death and sorrow. The frozen lake also symbolizes death. Everything freezing over shows that some animal’s source of water or life is gone and will not be back for a long time. The narrator is obviously in a secluded area, which could reveal that maybe he is the one preparing for death.
            The third stanza reveals more about the current situation. “He gives his harness bells a shake To ask if there is some mistake. The only other sound’s the sweep Of easy wind and downy flake. When it states that the horse is uneasy it could be showing the uneasiness of the entire situation. The horse could be aware of the fact that his master is contemplating suicide. Later in the stanza it says Of easy wind and downy flake. It is showing that is starting to snow again or that death is about to occur again. This is a stronger indication that the narrator is going to commit suicide. Then is says the only other sound is a sweep which could show his loneliness and one of the reasons he is trying to kill himself.
            The fourth and final stanza is a more jubilant stanza. “The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep.” He is saying that yes the woods are lovely place to take my life because they are dark and deep and no one will find him but he has other things to do before he dies.
            Stopping By Woods on a Snowing Evening is a sad and depressing poem. In no way is terrifying unless people are terrified of people contemplating suicide. Whoever said that Robert Frost was a terrifying poet must have misspoken on the fact that he is a depressing poet and not a terrifying poet.
           
            

5 comments:

  1. Your essay contains several errors, both concerning grammar and punctuation. "Some people due to the gloomy elements of his poetry have called Robert Frost" "poet because of his terrifying words but based on" " more of the type of a depressing poem than more of the terrifying poem" "many elements of it being depressing" "When is says" " but more in the sense of amount of death and sorrow" " Of easy wind and downy flake. When it states (you forgot to end your parentheses)" "Later in the stanza it says Of easy wind and downy flake (forgot to open parentheses for the quote)" "is showing that is starting to snow" "Then is says the only other" "yes the woods are lovely place to take my life because they are dark and deep and no one will find him but" "In no way is terrifying unless" "misspoken on the fact that he is a depressing poet." If you go back and revise these quotes in your original essay, it will be much more fluent than in its current state. Your support is good, and you did well with your interpretation of the symbolism in the story. Once you fix it up, you will have yourself a pretty strong essay.

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  2. Insert commas whenever there should be a pause and when you feel like parentheses would be necessary. Ex: " Some people due to the gloomy elements of his poetry have called Robert Frost “terrifying”." Correct it to: Some people, due to the gloomy elements of his poetry, have called Robert Frost "terrifying." Include that one of the "some people" is Lionel Trilling. I would not base an essay off proving why each stanza is not terrifying next time, but do not re-write your essay; instead give a basic summary in one paragraph, and state your points in the rest of your essay. State your main points in the introduction and re-state them in the closing. Other than those, I will agree with James that you have a very strong essay, good work!

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  3. Great job Chuck! I feel like it was very thorough and got your point across. I didn't think of providing evidence by going through the stanzas chronologically, but I think it was cool way of going about it! Other than that, I pretty much agree with James and Maxwell. Another tip would be to vary the first sentences of your body paragraphs because they can seem repetitive. Also, are you supposed to put the poem name in quotes? Not really sure so you may want to check on that! I thought it was a great essay though!!

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  4. Dear Chuck,

    What you have created are the roots of what can become a strong essay. I suggest expanding a little further on some points that you make about the poem. Also, you should try to vary the syntactical structure of your paper as it becomes repetitive as one reads through the poem. Also, on a gramatical note, you should change the title of the poem to have quotes instead of an italicized typeface. I also suggest further developing your conclusion to capture the points that you made in your essay and sum them up into one, easy to understand piece.

    Bryan

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  5. All of your ideas are clear, but they're getting a little confused because of all the grammatical errors. I would suggest that you go through your essay and rewrite every line paying special attention to being grammatically and technically correct, then you'll have a pretty solid essay.

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