Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Thesis Claims

Their Eyes Were Watching God is a Modernist piece that represents how hard the female life is.
  • I do not agree with this thesis statement. One because I do not feel that this was what the book was about at all. I understand what the person was attempting to say but if they were to reword their thesis statement it could be much better!

Their Eyes Were Watching God is a great example of the trials and tribulations of love.
  • I would say that this is an acceptable thesis statement because this has acceptable amount of controversy to it and could be supported thoroughly.

 Why does Janie marry three different guys, but at the end doesn’t try to find another guy to marry?
  • I do not think that this would be an acceptable thesis statement because this is not a statement. This is a question. If this person would make it into a statement it would be easier to say if it was good or not but this is a half and half. I would suppose that if you were to make this a statement that it would be interesting to see what support they would use to say. It is hard to say when it is not a statement. 



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